Misdirected.
Had this day not been expected?
Am I the only one who had suspected,
That one day he'd be disconnected,
From a world which seemed perfected,
Little did she know he was infected,
With her nature, overprotected.
I feel so bad; I was subjected,
His call for help; I had dissected.
I meant no harm, he was respected,
He was suppose to be protected,
Not to feel so well rejected.
Very beautiful. Great english writing skills. -F.J.
ReplyDeleteI love the words you used in your poem they were really nice!
ReplyDeleteI liked the rhyming throughout your whole poem. I also liked the deep meanings you had with your poem. Great job :D
ReplyDeleteI really like the fact that you made everything rhyme in the same pattern
ReplyDeleteIt was very pleasant and easy to read
Amazing rhyme, admirable composition.
ReplyDelete9.37/10, would read again.
Nice. :D
This is amazing! It's really hard to make all the lines rhyme. The words are carefully choosed, too. So nice.
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This is amazing! It is hard to make every line rhyme. The words are caefully choosed.
ReplyDeleteSo nice.
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